We have been learning to make our sentences more interesting. We have one minute to change a boring sentence into an interesting sentence to hook the reader.
What do you think?
Plain sentence: The worm dug in the dirt.
Interesting sentence: The wet slimy worm dug down down down in the soil that was as black as a ravens wing. By Josie.
Plain sentence: The worm dug in the dirt.
Interesting sentence: The fat juicy worm dug in the mud. By Ryan.
Plain sentence: The fish swam in the sea.
Interesting sentence: The precious cute fish swam in the colourful blue sea. By Jorja.
Josie, you really got the hang of using poetic devices like similes to make your sentences more interesting! Well done... that is stuff I had to teach to high school kids! - Griffin's Mum
ReplyDelete